J'ai tellement aime ce poeme tres spectaculaire

I did like this, but at the same time something about it was off. I understand that it was for a contest, but it sets off a bad example to the younger age group -- saying that it is alright to throw away a friend for a lover. It can go two ways, really...the other friend isn`t a true friend or love is more important than friendship..I dunno, that was the only thing off on this poem. Other than that, it was perfect..your imagery was great and the flow was flawless.

5.5
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