Awwww. hopefully this isnt true. this is just to sad and sweet. VERY SWEET.

i did find a couple of errors though:

starring [staring, starring is like starring in a play]

god is cry[ing]

=]

hmmm. i think emotionally this is more of a 4.5 because i could see the pain and sorta felt it there, but to me it just wasnt as strong as the ones i read last night.

[ps thanks for adding me to your favorites. i appreciate it.]