by Sherry Lynn Sep 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Do you dare ask why |
This is a very revealing poem that reflect a self knowledge and honesty that is rare |
Ok, i thought it was a pretty good poem, but throughout the whole poem it seemed like the rhyming was forced and it just made the poem sound weird, and you also changed yoru ryhming pattern, but still id have to give you a 4/5 |
It was very good. On some parts the rhyming was off but other than that it was pretty nice. I'll give it a four. |
by Fsams
Let your souls be entwined and you get all the love you desire. This is what I WISH for you but your poem tells that its not possible at the moment and thats a sad news. Your poem has mournful feelings and beautiful descriptions of the qualities of your loved one. I loved the poem. |
by Shauna
Great Poem!! |