Awww...hunn you did a great job of putting your emotions into this you did a wonderful job writing this poem 5/5 <33

one suggestion: dont make the poem a paragraph seperate it like this
I took the black rose u gave me
upon our first date
i couldn't figure out why
cause its the sign of death
but i took it anyways,
the thorns stuck in to me
like burning needles
at what i thought was the pain of saying i love you
but it came to be the pain of death,
upon my last dieing word....
ILL NEVER FORGET

It could be little longer and you could use some metaphors that will create stronger atmosphere. Anyway nice poem, I like the category you chose for your first piece. It is very interesting.