My blood stains your lap

by Lenny   Sep 1, 2007


Remember me?
My eyes cry

My blood stains your lap
Where I lie

Im smiling but
Is smiling real?

With all this blood
Am I trusted to feel?

Am I really happy,
Kneeling in true

Is that what blood and tears
Mean to you?

Remember me?
Im dying here

My blood stains your lap
Oh

Dear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    I agree^ I like the way you seperated your stanzas. It adds an eerie effect, I find. The end leaves you hanging; wondering what all of it means. A lot of emotion withing each word, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabella

    Cool!
    I like the way you seperate your stanzas.
    Greatly written.

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