Comments : My blood stains your lap

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabella

    Cool!
    I like the way you seperate your stanzas.
    Greatly written.

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    I agree^ I like the way you seperated your stanzas. It adds an eerie effect, I find. The end leaves you hanging; wondering what all of it means. A lot of emotion withing each word, 5/5.