Great imagery and very unique piece, so descriptive and captivating.
My favorite stanza is:
-dressed in a dark suit
grey shirt and black tie
a gold chain hangs around your neck
sunglasses hide your eyes-

You have just one small mistake: grey in the first stanza should be gray.

5/5 from me

Very original and interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it. You created great atmosphere, and you expressed emotions uniquely. Well done! 5/5

Oh quite a sexy piece you have written here =p. I really did enjoy this you painted an amazing picture in mind of exactly what the outfit looked like. This poem was unique I must say I havn't read a poem on a hit man before but the title definitly caught my interest as did the whole poem. Overall everything was brilliant. loved it keep up the good work ~mel

Oh snap!! There he goes dressin' up for someone else!! LOL Seriously though, I believe you captured the moment perfectly.

This is just great, Willow! So simple, yet perfectly written. It really is amazing what can inspire a poem, huh? I bet Michael just loved it!

Lol Ilike how you took time to express such a small moment of deep emotion I love it.

PrinceCharming,