by Sarah Sep 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
I have grown up to realize, |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Aw. the flow and rhythm was nice. and the message was strong. the only suggestion i have for you is to capitalize him and he [in reference to God]. |
Concentrating your thoughts to a superior writing, keeps our reading go courage, its like a blooming blossom that continues the day go bright. You poems I read, your expressions I studied, your feelings I valued. All and all you deserve, its almost an excellent one I should say. ( 'I mean your writing'). Keep writing, bring more poems and keep me informed, to enable me to feel free to read your interesting poem lettering. Thanks for now, more thanks to follow.. bye! |