Comments : The Demon In Me

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very dark, effective and greatly written. I like the imagery that you created, and your choice of words in this one.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -I have a demon in my soul,
    few people know.
    Sometimes it breaks free,
    but I am still me.
    I try to capture it my friend,
    before it hurts anyone again.-

    I can relate to this one.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina Famili

    WOW
    some much emotion and power in your writing
    we really need to chat sometime

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Oh, wow. Such an awesome poem. It had much meaning for me. Thanks for sharing it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    I loved it.. absolutelty loved it!
    a great write! keep it up!!
    XXXX arun

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    The intensity and the depth of emotion in this poem is really great... beautifully written...

    5/5! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Yip .. thts a great one again .. amazing ..simply..

    my fav. stanza wud be..

    "..I have a demon in my soul,
    few people know.
    Sometimes it breaks free,
    but I am still me.
    I try to capture it my friend,
    before it hurts anyone again.."

    they way you express it is nothing less than phenomenal.. an awesome write

    Great Work

    ~Wake~