So sad, so deep and powerful, emotion filled every line, this was awesome, sweetie.
loved it loads.
love Tara-Kay
x

Wow, this was a great poem, written perfectly....
i felt real emotion throughout the poem,

keep up the great job
a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it.

I don't know what to say, you really did a great job from start to end. it was awesome..sad but emotions was well written in every lines. keep it up..very talented^^
5/5 for it

This poem is excellent, you expressed emotions amazingly and imagery is great. Good topic, this poem has really effective rhythm. 5/5

Great poem. Amazing written.
Very sad and powerful and you expressed your emotions wonderfully.

Keep it up! 5/5

-Shannon <3

O.0 Not what I expected, this was a total surprise, But I loved it!.

Each line was filled with emotion, each word so strong, each stanza deep.
This was so captivating. I could feel the pain and desperation as if it was I myself in the poem.
Spectacular Pen,
Keep it up,
---Elly Elaine. 5/5

Nice poem, very expressive and clear on meaning. The first stanza was lacking on flow but throughout the rest of the poem you recovered nicely. You have a geniune style very enjoybale to read. The final stanza was my favorite, a perfect ending. 5 for you as you deserve it!

That was painfully sad. You did a fantastic job expressing your emotions though. && I could picture this whole scene in my head. :]] Which is always great. The flow was flawless & you ended it perfectly. Fabulous job. 5.5

- Stephanie Lynn .+.

It was another amazing poem form you. If only i could express myself as you do. I hope i can write as good as you some day. Loved it all came form the heart. And i hope things get better. (lol) you know what that is about don't you? 5/5 form me.

Another one that I could truly relate with. The last stanza was so haunting and powerful, it was the perfect way to end a wodnerful poem. Well done *5/5*

I tried to come back to reality
But my thoughts won't let me
The truth has been locked
Am I chained or am I free

^^my fav

you have such great talent i love your writting this is like, i can relate to it.. i am depressed as well and its like your trapped and want people to care for you but like no one is there. lol

Powerful, from the beginning to the end, very emotional and descriptive. Truly greatly written poem it touched me in so many ways and I can relate to it. You expressed feelings excellently.
Keep up!
5/5

Sad, but a great poem ^.^ wooooooooooooo! go you ^^ i give ya a 5/5 ^^