Comments : All I can do

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    So true, all it takes is a second for your heart to say goodbye to you and be part of someone else......
    i love this poem...
    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    It isn't bad but I don't like it. Sorry this is just my opinion but your other poems are deeper and you could write this one better. I don't prefer love poetry and you are one of my favorite authors but I don't like this one. I won't rate it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    ^ Well I love this one.

    I think a lot of people can relate to this; I sure can. Everyone has felt this way before- I'm sure of it.
    5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wonderful, just wonderful.
    This poem described feelings that I'm sure mostly everyone can relate to one time or another. A lovely piece of poetry. Overall, I give a 5.5. Great job. :]]

    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow really good poem girly! you put a lot of emotion into it and the rhyming just pulled it together : ) 5/5 <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    I loved it it was sooo true. It takes only a second to know when your in love. But soooo much longer to let it go. As always a 5/5 form me.

  • 17 years ago

    by musiqlover015

    I'm sorta going through something like this, so yeah, i REALLY like this poem... either way it was well-written

  • 17 years ago

    by Biya

    What a lovely Poem !!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh my ... this was something I could really relate too. The emotions you spoke, truly touched my heart and overall this piece was a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I had boy that i had loved so much and just left for a dumb reason and it torn me apart and what made things worst is that he sat next to me in class i can understand were your coming from this poem...great work..!!!=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I had boy that i had loved so much and just left for a dumb reason and it torn me apart and what made things worst is that he sat next to me in class i can understand were your coming from this poem...great work..!!!=)

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A beautiful poem.
    I know what this is like. :]
    It happens to me all the time with this kid.
    But he moved away last year. :[

    anyway. great poem.
    i liked the ending. :]
    another great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I am going to add you to my favorites list

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Whoops ...you were allready there

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Here We go a style I'm use to. =) beautiful poem, great show of emotion. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I like this poems how u been

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    This is a great poem. I can relate so much. I was actually crying b4 i read this and this made me cry more but thats not a bad thing. It just means ur a excelent writer. KEEP UP THE WORK.
    Truly
    whitney

  • 15 years ago

    by Galldora

    Just a wonderful poem! lots of relateable emotions!