Awww this poem is short but sooooo sweet i love it very much 5/5 all the way
i really like this poem.
its going in my favs lol

laura

Short and so so sweet. Aww, its like so romantic.
It flowed well and just made me smile!
Love Tara-Kay
x

Aaww. this is cute. and happy early birthday goran. i liked this poem a bunch. the only thing that [insert a phrase i cant word correctly] was that the end of the poem was expected from you.

surprise me goran. write something a little different than you usually do. =]

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Happy early birthday Goran. I loved the last line of this poem it was the most beautiful part and really touched the soul, although I do not believe this is the best of yours I have read but who I am to judge which is the best and which is not so therefor I was just stating my opinion. The only reason why I do not find this to be your best is the flow was a little off to me but other then that the emotions were in this. Well done on creating a good read. ~mel

Awww how sweet... =] it made me smile... which i havent done that lately lol so im glad i read a happy poem...

it was short but sweet so it was worth the read...

the flow was great...and i like how you set it up... it was kinda like a pause after "i heard" .. i really enjoyed it.

nice work on this one.5/5 keep it up.

Nice! short and really sweet. i love the style you used and you used the repitition well.

Tooo short but full of emotion too sweet nice work .... ilove to read it...^_^ 5/5

Well, she probably will never forget your birthday from now on!
Nice and sweet!

5/5 Ingrid

Aww that's so sweet! finally a hopeful poem, i like it, i hope you're getting better. another beautiful poem!

Touching, Truly, Touching.

And in a short poem too Goran. You really portrayed the emotion's.

I really love your work,
keep writting,
Elly.

So lovely, love IS the greatest gift of all!

U go boy do ur thing keep up the gd work