Kyra.. i must say .. that was an amazing piece of work.. a totaly spellbounding effect.. how you describe everything and the way it paints such a vivid image -gosh- .. simply incredible ..

when i first read it.. the first four lines.. i instantly took a liking to them.. i thought they were the best.. but then i read the whole poem and its just hard to point a certain line or anything.. its just so damn amazing ..

Love this one.. greatly penned .. a very sad and expressive write.. amazingly done .. !!

keep that chin up :D

~Wake~