I love this. every1 feels grief from death and its basically summed up in your poem. i hope your not talking from experience. xx btw, i got another poem up.

Dani jeezz did ths rlly hppn if it did i feell soo badd for uuu plzz comment bac and tht is a rlly good poem

Whoever rated this low...should not have. It is well written and deep. I can really relate to it.....great writing keep it up 5/5

Dee

Aww..very cute cry for help! 5/5

This poem had very strong emotion and a great flow...excellent write 5/5