All you can Bear

by Cara   Sep 2, 2007


Why bother getting up, out of bed
why bother pretending
that you didn't wish yourself dead
perhaps if they understood why
that its all their fault
that they didn't ever pry
For years you've showed no emotion
except they never realized
they were too busy wanting their promotion
thats how it always was
their life more important than ours
so see how they feel
will they cry for hours?
You hope they do,
cause you wont see
now your pretending your what they used to be
don't worry, no one will care
they've finally grasped you've taken all you can bear
just walk out
break down
and start all over again.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Cara another excellent write , you seem to be quite good at capturing the emotion the angst of the moment , again well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony

    Wow.. this one is.. wow.. omg. i gotta ask u sumthin about this one ok? wen we talk again.. lol ok bye i love this one and i love you.. byez:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is really sad..but powerful emotions in this poem. i liked it alot. it flowed really well. so well written. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well tell me about it ! I can totally relate to your poem because that's what I am living right now... looking at people who's smiling & complementing you with more lies that devastate you.. It's all a lie ..no more than a play... Anyway, great poem 5/5 Well written & beautifully penned

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    This one made me feel like I was the one in the 'hot-seat', which made me feel a little depressed.
    A well-made poem.
    Really liked it.
    Keep it up <3
    Also 5/5

    - Nicole xx

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