You never say who are "they" which makes this much more interesting, it forces the reader to use there imagination, i understood it this way--> "they" are the people who dont believe in you, can be parents sometimes, friends, etc.
i really like it :)
dani

I really liked this one. i can relate, but so can alot of people. very well written.
~ApRiL

This is really good . X

Awwwww
This is so sad.
I know what you mean though.
My dad and mom are always like, "WORK WORK WORK NO TIME FOR KIDS" and it's okay for my siblings cuz they're way older than me. But fro me it's different, because they don't ask me "How are you? Anything you wanna share?". Not once did they say that.

This one made me feel like I was the one in the 'hot-seat', which made me feel a little depressed.
A well-made poem.
Really liked it.
Keep it up <3
Also 5/5

- Nicole xx

Well tell me about it ! I can totally relate to your poem because that's what I am living right now... looking at people who's smiling & complementing you with more lies that devastate you.. It's all a lie ..no more than a play... Anyway, great poem 5/5 Well written & beautifully penned

This is really sad..but powerful emotions in this poem. i liked it alot. it flowed really well. so well written. keep it up 5/5

Wow.. this one is.. wow.. omg. i gotta ask u sumthin about this one ok? wen we talk again.. lol ok bye i love this one and i love you.. byez:)

Cara another excellent write , you seem to be quite good at capturing the emotion the angst of the moment , again well done

Grant