What would u do(work in progress)

by Liz   Sep 2, 2007


If i died would u care?
what would u do?
would u say"oh hey i know her,thats too bad shes dead"
or would u say "i wanna die too"
what would u do?

would u care if i stopped talking to u?
what would u do ?
would u say "i dont care i dont need her anyway"
or would u say"i cant stand not talking to u"
what would u do?

would u care
if tomarrow i never called u
and u found out i was dead
would u say "just another girl gone"
or would u say"i love her! how can i go on now?"

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  • 17 years ago

    by ChrisT

    Its good cant wait till its finished

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job on your poem. Keep writing :)

    would u care
    if tomarrow i never called u
    and u found out i was dead
    would u say "just another girl gone"
    or would u say"i love her! how can i go on now?"

    It is the worst thing to lose the one you love to death. I know this first hand. You have to go on. For those that love you. I hope you never have to feel this pain.
    Take Care Cindy