LOVED these lyrics...like a country song :] Lol, I can relate to this - which as you know, I love being able to relate to poems that I read lol.

"But Baby, when I told you I loved you,
I could've never meant it more.
I keep dreaming about you coming home,
And walking through that door.
Baby, oh please come home,
Even if it's for one more night.
I swear I'll fix everything,
I swear I'll make it right."

^^ OH my, AMAZING.

5.5
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Bit long for anything other than a country song.
but it's a good song, and the flow kept my attention.
i've read your other work, and just decided to comment on this. you have immense talent, love. your writing catches my attention and keeps it. good job.

5/5