by xXxemzxXx Sep 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Will you remember me |
by VSambulance
Your writing was a bit broken in some places, with you stopping the rhythm, but that's besides the point. I'm guessing the poem is about an ex, or a lost love. I like it. good read |
by Robert
The poem was good a clear message the flow was good too I think I would do the last verse for the top part of the poem other then that a good read Plot121 |