I really liked this poem...great job!

Brooke<3

I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS POEM

I like this, a lot. It was full of emotion and the imagery was just great. I was able to see the whole story perfectly with how well the words flowed and everything. Great job.

"I thought he could be mine,
I wished it with my soul;
But I guess that down the line,
Procrastination took its toll."

^^ That stanza, my oh my. LOVE it.

5.5
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