Miracle Love.

by ABake   Sep 2, 2007


We were both falling, our love spiraling out of control.
Felt like it was over, but yet still holding on.
We had no idea what was happening, not yet done.

Missing you so much, needing you here with me.
Got accustomed to always seeing you, never alone.
The pain cut so deep, heartache indescribable.

Almost lost a love we worked so hard to get;
Even at our worst, we managed to save one another.
Back at our best now, our hard work finally payed off.

May have our troubles, our ups and downs.
But we always get through, no matter what we face.

::I am just getting over a case of writers block, so it is not my best. But the emotion these words express for me, makes it my best yet. Yes the flow sucks. End of sotry so please DO NOT point that out to me I am well aware.::

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  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    As I just realized by a few people,
    flow doesn't make a poem, the emotions do.
    You said it yourself.. those words express a lot more,
    so with that said, I think you did an amazing job.
    The depth was very well written.
    Keep it up.
    Overall Rating: 5.0/5