Comments : You're perfect (I love you)

  • 17 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    I love it. its expresses feeling so well! reminds me of a special someone in my life...hehe!

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Aweh.

    That was refreshing. A real treat. Nice poem. Write more!

    This was a great line
    "Sometimes, I'd like the whole world to know,
    But no one can understand
    The way I feel for you..
    It's unique..
    I'm so in love..
    With you!! "

    Aweh. How sweet it would if a girl said that to me. Wow...

    Anyways, I can see your still a newbe. But I see the marks of a great poet. It burns within you. It's a good love poem. But If I may ask, maybe write something with... a little more vocabulary. You know?

    The words were something I can make up in the top of my head. Try putting your head in a dictionary and thesaraus and master the words so you write a poem to your fullest potential!! ^_^

    Anyways. I think it is an excellent poem.

    Voted 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Keith

    Love it, its nice, from the heart as the person below says, quite rightly, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mohsin Armaan

    Such a Nice Poem

    Keep It Up

    ~ KEEP GLOWIN ALWAYS~

  • 16 years ago

    by Rach

    Just gorgeous. Sounds like you have a great love for this person. keep up the good writing 5/5