I Guess I Was Pushing My Luck

by I Seem to be the Heartless   Sep 2, 2007


When days are low
And friends are few,
You said you'd be the one
I could turn to.

You had stolen my heart
And forced your way into my head.
I fell for your lies
Believed all that you said.

But how could I have been so wrong,
I thought this was real.
There's no way of mistaking
How you make me feel.

You said you wanted more from this -
Not just an easy f@#k.
I guess by wishing that that was true
I was pushing my luck.

And then when you asked me to get rid of my child,
A part of me died.
Your lack of heart and caring
Has lead me to suicide...

02 September 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    This was a good one as well, not as good as the others though. The ending seemed incomplete, as if there was still more you could've said 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was really sad, sweetie. It really had me in tears, you made this emotional and powerful.
    Loved every line
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • I loved this. Very well written.