The way to Oblivion

by Catastrophic Beauty   Sep 2, 2007


A river streams down your face,
You whisper "I'm such a disgrace".
Your heart is torn at the seams,
You snuggle in tarnished dreams.

Sinful thoughts haunt you,
Controlling what you say and do.
Bounded by chains - you can't see,
But in your dreams you are free.

Laced up in broken promises,
Falling into a sorrowful abyss.
Becoming foul and rotten,
You'll soon be just forgotten.

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  • 12 years ago

    by kenzie

    LOVED THIS ALOT!!!!(:

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Once again very good ^^ im jelious, I can't write nearly as good as that XD haha 5/5 you earned it ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    I didn't know what you ment by the word snuggle. but over all another good piece, very strong,
    5

  • 17 years ago

    by XXX miss Kierstin Linn XXX

    I like it... its dark and pretty I can't write like that because i can't think like that... lol you have alot of talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I liked the metaphors you used. Maybe a better ending line could be used but other than that it's alright. I'll give it a four. I wish I could tell you more about what to improve on but I think this is just a personal prefrence thing for me.

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