Wow! in such a short poem you gave so much depth and feeling! well done!!!

flowed so well too and great rhyming! not forced at all!

well done 5/5 keep writing!

Love
Jacs
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LOVE IT!!

I liked the metaphors you used. Maybe a better ending line could be used but other than that it's alright. I'll give it a four. I wish I could tell you more about what to improve on but I think this is just a personal prefrence thing for me.

I like it... its dark and pretty I can't write like that because i can't think like that... lol you have alot of talent

I didn't know what you ment by the word snuggle. but over all another good piece, very strong,
5

Once again very good ^^ im jelious, I can't write nearly as good as that XD haha 5/5 you earned it ^^

LOVED THIS ALOT!!!!(: