To See You Smile

by Nuh   Sep 2, 2007


Her tears are coming down like razor blades
and no im not the one to blame
its him

so im here once again drying your tears
girl just ended between you and him
and no im not saying this because i want you for myself
i just want to you to be happy
although you torn my heart apart one you left me for him
but its ok
i just want you to be happy
but your not

as long i see you smile
its just makes me feel good
and i smile back

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    LIKE IT!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    The flow was a little off but I like the content, it is a good start. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Windsong

    I like it
    favv.
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    This is sad and sweet. I liked your choice of words and it flowed nicely. And yeah, you should write it as a story. ^_^

    Take Care!

    -Shannon <3