Pain

Good little poem!! very sad though. I know how it feels to not have the one who love... and trust me things get better... when i wrote most of my poems i was dating a guy who i was just so in love with... we broke up.. and i could not get over him for a good year or so... untill i met michael... who i am engaged to now.. and now when i think back at all the times i use to get sad over him.. i think of how silly it was... there is always something much better out there for you........ pm if u ever need to talk!!!! Great work though on the poem!!!

I like it alot, but you should definitely add some more feelings about this. Other than that, it's really good, and I trust me I know how you feel when you write this poem. As always, I love the rhymes:)
-5/5 Katie