Deana
Beautiful piece. Stuning imagery.
Take Care Cindy

I just thought I would tell you that it is very rare I read anything so happy as this on this site. I like hopeful things. I guess I understand that there is a place for tragedy, but it's so real and often that I much rather read a rarity like this.

This is beautiful.

Perfect verses of love ....love the ending lines...

An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach
My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
I am at peace, because you loved me

^ tht's it exactly! peace....found in that one special person....

Ohmygosh, that was so good I like looked back to make sure i was reading it right that is an absolutely great poem!!!!!

From the 11 year old poet XD

Panic x

Thanks for commenting mine.

i love this one
you're a good poet =]

An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach
My mind ,my heart , my soul agree
I am at peace, because you loved me

Deana,

This is my favorite stanza.
Your poem describes very well how the love of a man can turn your whole life around. A very beautiful tribute to love!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Whoa gosh, now this was a great poem, so much love and affection. you have an unreal amount of talent! bravo!

5/5 David

Wow.. amazing.
i love the way you use your words.

i dont know why, but this verse is my fav:
"An aching heart no longer seeks
Empty arms no longer reach"

well.. great poem!!

This is the essence of deep, amazing poetry. nice job!

WOw. THis is beautiful. Wonderfully written. It was truly deep and a poem from the heart. 5/5

Aw! How wonderful is it to be loved? Well, just read this poem and find out! lol It was so good! I loved it. It was beautiful.

Love truly is an amazing thing and this poem says it all :] 5/5 great job!

The title reminded me of the song ceilin deon sang!

nice poem!5/5

DAMN THIS POEM IS SOMETHING ELSE I GUESS U CAN SAY I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU COMING FROM I GOTTA GIVE THIS A 5/5

Beautiful poem. :) I loved it! You did an outstanding job. 5/5

Bri~

Incredible, its awesome it has so much illusion!! you should check out some of mine:).... i gave this a five out of five

Beautifully penned, breathtakingly amazing piece. I tried to pick a favorite part but I figured out that I love the whole poem.

Thank you for sharing this.

I thought, it was beautiufull, very sweet. if you would read and comment on a few of mine, i would love it i will read more of yours.

Exquisite!!!!

A beautiful and heartfelt piece superbly penned.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...