Deana
Beautiful and sad. Imagery and word choices are great.

Memories lying dormant
Emotions held by protective chains
Weakness brought by lack of rest
Frees the heart to feel the pain

These lines really touched my heart.
Take Care Cindy

"Loitering there in limbo
Refreshing warmth renewed
The dawn breaks in harshest light
Gone,the end of the night and you. "

What a sad ending.. the imagery was spot on, i could picture it all perfectly.. well done
5/5
*Gem*

Gosh now this poem is really good! first up the title was imensly inviting, i loved it and just wanted to read the poem to find out more :D

secondly your word choice throughout this whole poem was unique and fresh, i loved it!

and lastly your descriptive and emotive words to really play on the readers heart and thoughts, you sure have talent. well done.

5/5 david

Exceptional write! Wether the story of a one night stand or of love unable to be fulfilled you have done well for yourself. Been there, done that and have the inner scars to show for it. After reading two of your poems I just had to find out you are a "Jerseygirl", but of course.