I know how you feel. i can realte to this..i think at some point we all feel this way. life is hard but life is beautiful too.
the poem is very well written. you have put some very real and raw emotion in it. it's deep and somewhat sad but still amazingly well done. great work on this piece. keep it up! =]
and Don't Give up just yet.
--Viola

p.s. thanks for your comment on mine. :)

This is definitly a good one. I like the poem in all means. You have nicely penned and it flows really well. Keep it up

tc
Fsams

I love your repetitveness about this poem , it was effective, like the meaning behind it. :)

5/5 David

Nice poem with beautiful but sad expressions to describe yourself.Powerful writing, keep it up!
"but your the one that brings me down
your the one that never stays around
your the only one that can hurt me and make me cry
your the one with all the power to make me hurt "
^^I loved this part.
Take care and keep writing,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS