So true, and a well-written poem! 5/5

Wow! Brittney you impressed me, simply breathtaking. So true poem, I absolutely agree with you. Very effective poem, it has great atmosphere and you wrote it powerfully. Excellent topic(I also like the title, it is somehow familiar, lol) Anyway this poem shows that you are really talented!

Wow, very deep and true. Whole poem is excellently written, you used great words and wrote it truly amazingly!
My favorite stanza is:

-He smiles and says I'm broken.
She cries and says I'm fine.
Confusion surrounding us all,
But when will it cross the line?-

You should be proud on this piece :)
5/5 from me

The rhyme and flow of this piece was flawless. Awesome concept, there's a lot truth to this one. Great read/write. 5/5

marcella

Hmmm....
your poem seemed to be rather interesting though no one got time to think that in today's life when we are so busy
its good you thought over this subject

i dint like that line
It shall all end up in our demise

Means thats what life is and you hsould be ahaving a rather accepting attitude in life
i know that people pretende a lot but still I think true people exist in that world which is quite a personal opinion of mines

rest I enjoyed this line very much
He smiles and says I'm broken.
She cries and says I'm fine.
Confusion surrounding us all,
But when will it cross the line?

``Of Illusions and Reality``

Well Done Dear
Keep it up
I would wish to give you 4.5
But Its not here so am giving you 5/5
Take care