This poem is very interesting and unique, it has great topic and it is also very creative. I think that this one should be in some other category, but that is just my opinion. You have few mistakes, you used some same words too many times and that leaves bad impression. But anyway this piece deserves 5/5, I really like it!

The story line of this was fairly interesting. As a poem, I didn't feel that it had the "wow" factor, but it was still pretty good. Sometimes, it felt like the rhyme was forced but other than that it flowed pretty well.

HOORAY UNPREDICTABLE IRONY!!!
YOU ARE MY HERO FOR THE DAY!!!
i love the twisted humor. it made me giggle too! you're amazing in my book!
congrats. would you like a cookie?

Now, this was a great read. It's probably one of the most interesting poems I've read in a long time... not to mention most unique. The story line was great and kept me wanting more. 5/5

marcella

Very cute poem. I really enjoy this one. 5/5 from me!!! And don't forget with your promises!!!

Your originality is what stands out the most in this poem. It’s lovely. But also your creative word choice and style paints a picture in my mind…and it made me giggle too. Great message, great delivery and great work.

Wicked :)