Wow. I love this. Wonderfully written. Very descriptive and you expressed your emotions beautifully. I must admit when I first looked at it I thought the length was a little bit daunting but I'm so glad I read it.

"And how bittersweet it is when your fairy tale has to end,
And your first love has to become just another long lost friend."
^^^ Favourite lines. I can relate to them and they just really stuck out to me.

Great Job && Thanks for the comment! 5/5

-Shannon <3

Two lines truly stood out to me

But every straight road at one point or another has to bend.

and

And how bittersweet it is when your fairy tale has to end,
And your first love has to become just another long lost friend.

Those were very good! Nice job altogether!
Charisma*

and

Two lines truly stood out to me

But every straight road at one point or another has to bend.

and

And how bittersweet it is when your fairy tale has to end,
And your first love has to become just another long lost friend.

Those were very good! Nice job altogether!
Charisma*

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