Drowning

by audrey harris   Sep 3, 2007


Life is but a sea that I seem to be sinking in,
in the middle of the ocean with no hope.
The waves, they crash, undertow pulling me down,
but suddenly in view, a boat.

In hope that I can be rescued here
I struggle to float and breathe.
The boat draws closer, "I can be saved!"
But it laughs, turns around, and leaves.

Betrayed by what I trusted and feeling desperation,
I start to let myself be pulled down.
Yet I hear a voice and look up, a hand,
and "Stand up, don't let yourself drown!"

Following instructions, I stretch my knees
and realize to my surprise
that this ocean I was "drowning" in
was only toddler-sized!

I soon realize that the only reason
I could ever be pulled down in this "sea"
is because I felt self-pity exaggerated,
but objects are smaller than they seem.

So in this kiddy pool I stand in,
I laugh and know, this is true:
the size of what you're going through
is really just determined by YOU.

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  • 16 years ago

    by maEve may

    ..well done!love it..^_^..

  • 17 years ago

    by turtle

    Yep! This is so true, especially when you let yourself get controlled by your emotions...

    your poem was great! it had "emotion" and you can really "feel" it....

    this part though..

    Following instructions, I stretch my knees
    and realize to my surprise
    that this ocean I was "drowning" in
    was only toddler-sized!

    could be better if you choose words that are more (not sure if this is the right word...) appropriate?... what i mean some words kinda break the rhythm...

    but that's only a suggestion! :) your poem is great!

  • 17 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    W0W, ii rEALLy LiiKED DAT P0EM. CUZ iiTS S0 TrUE!!!! G00D J0B!!!! :-)