by Crystal Gaze Sep 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A Betraying Friend. |
by Blissful
Now this is something I could really relate too. The emotions you spoke of are ones I am familar with. The flow was kinda rocky and things seemed forced but the feelings were real. *4/5* |
by Tammie
I can definately relate to this, as many people would be able to. It was such a simple poem, yet filled with a lot of emotion. A very enjoyable read. I've never done a collab before, but I bet it's fun. Well done. :] |
That was phenomenal the emotion was sooo strong! again keep up the great work |
by Tricky Daze
You two did a really good job together |
by Cella Bella
A sad piece written beautifully. The rhyme and flow were flawless throughout the entire poem. 5/5 |