Waiting for you

by Boy   Sep 3, 2007


Spreading these arms
Keeping smilies on my face
I am still waiting for you

Having bright love in my eyes
Keeping strong feelings in my heart
I am still waiting for you

Facing every storm in life
Standing alone in another side
I am still waiting for you

My love will never die
wishing to see you by my side
I am still waiting for you

written by: hassan kirmai
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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I am amazed at how much depth and emotion such a short poem contains! This is beautifully written. The repitition of the last line really gives the meaning and emotion impact. This is a wonderful poem and says so much.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is a very good poem. i really enjoyed reading it a lot. it flowed so nicely. you did a great job! keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    I can totally relate the whole poem and its content to my life and its very honestly written. Dont worry dear you will reach your destination. 5.5 all the way

    tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Short but so sweet
    good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    Good on you for getting your emotion out..
    i totally know how it feels
    and yeah its sucks for your love not to be noticed
    i totally get it

    Marissa.

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