Awe.hun it was so sad
But you know you have to get over her
I wish I could find her and bring her next to you
But it's clear that she doesn't love you and don't deserve you

Keep it up,
laura

Bravo!!!
Really beautiful poem.
keep up the good work.

God bless u.

Hassan
I really can relate to your words in this piece.

My love will never die
wishing to see you by my side
I am still waiting for you

These lines really touched my heart.
Great job!
Your friend Cindy

This is a brilliant poem well done, i love the wording andemotion i it well done

I liked this poem alot. The emotion ws quite beautifully sad portrayed in such depth. Loved the structure of the poem it was neat. This whole poem was capturing and really touched my heart and soul. Keep on writing you have nice talent. Well done on creating such an amazing poem. Definitly deserves a 5/5 in my eyes. ~Mel

Very sweet peom. the flow was a little choppy, but the repitition was used beautifully. lovely emotional peice. kudos!

Hassan,

just wonderful piece of lines you had uttered in a very soundul manner and thaat itself thrilled my heart a lot. Then the bottom three line are so much sweet than the top three lines. Its short, its sweet and its very much amazing little pretty good poem. More similar poems I am awaiting from your end.

Luz and Naz
(the two dimensions)

Just love this pome. Great job.

Hug and smile,
Pam

Sweet poem, heartfelt feelings. If this doen't bring her back, I don't know what will!

5/5 Ingrid
Hassan, thanx for commenting on my poem, it really means a lot to me when ppl do that!

Oh myyy god i swear thats how i feel wow man that hurts great job =)

Good on you for getting your emotion out..
i totally know how it feels
and yeah its sucks for your love not to be noticed
i totally get it

Marissa.

Short but so sweet
good work

I can totally relate the whole poem and its content to my life and its very honestly written. Dont worry dear you will reach your destination. 5.5 all the way

tc
Fsams

This is a very good poem. i really enjoyed reading it a lot. it flowed so nicely. you did a great job! keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

I am amazed at how much depth and emotion such a short poem contains! This is beautifully written. The repitition of the last line really gives the meaning and emotion impact. This is a wonderful poem and says so much.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka