Twinkle (haiku)

Know what I loved about this poem? The first line. Two words = five syllables. I really liked the idea of that.

I love (most) haikus for the simple fact that they're short yet sweet. Some are relaxing and some joyful... but some are horrid as well. You have a very nice haiku here. I don't think I'd put it under relaxing OR joyful, rather refreshing. It gives a glimpse of hope.

Another great Haiku. Very romantic and hopeful. Again an enjoyable read.

Pretty perfect id say. I cant really flaw Hiakus because im not expert. I like them though, nice :D

You can really write a great haiku. In three little lines, you give as much to the reader as if they read a paragraph. It really was quite beautiful and I liked the topic.
5/5

marcella

I really liked this, such power in so few words, it amazes me how well you can leave such an impact on me after I read your work :]

5.5
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