Beautiful.

Gem
Beautiful Haiku :)
Love Cindy

Another beautiful poem written by you Gem.It's just so beautifully done.
Take care <3

This is beautiful...the imagery here was fantastic, and you managed to create so much beauty in such a short form.

This is very beautiful, I really enjoy in it, it could be a longer, I think I know that this is Haiku but you chose excellent topic and I am sorry because it isn't longer... Anyway I like it, every line is so effective. Well done!

I love this poem. I love stars i can sit watching them for ever:) I love them so much i got them tattood on my wrist (just 4 little ones) but i think this is a beautuful little poem to them. I just love it, its effective:)

Kelly
xx

Loved it! Isn't it crazy how much of an impact so little words can make?

I really liked this, such power in so few words, it amazes me how well you can leave such an impact on me after I read your work :]

5.5
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You can really write a great haiku. In three little lines, you give as much to the reader as if they read a paragraph. It really was quite beautiful and I liked the topic.
5/5

marcella

Pretty perfect id say. I cant really flaw Hiakus because im not expert. I like them though, nice :D

Another great Haiku. Very romantic and hopeful. Again an enjoyable read.

Know what I loved about this poem? The first line. Two words = five syllables. I really liked the idea of that.

I love (most) haikus for the simple fact that they're short yet sweet. Some are relaxing and some joyful... but some are horrid as well. You have a very nice haiku here. I don't think I'd put it under relaxing OR joyful, rather refreshing. It gives a glimpse of hope.