I wonder why they dont comment on this poem because its nice, you had specify everything u feel within your heart I can c thats on your poem, every stanza u wrote says something in m,y heart. 'I bless the day I found you, because its a day i found the true love' I hope u a good luck thats your love one, nice piece Makie!

You had related the facts that is hidden within your pure heart I beleive. This is a lovely writing and a better feelings. What the author njabulo b said is perfectly correct and I agree on her's expressions. Grade 8/

its we,

luz and naz
(the two dimensions)