Nothingness (Haiku)

Once again, not relaxing or joyful. Refreshing, but not so much with hope, rather faith.

This haiku I notice isn't traditional. It doesn't really go along with nature, rather human nature - fear. And, you have a long run on sentence rather than 2 parts to it. I read an article once about traditional haikus and 'breaking rules'. And, ever since I've enjoyed reading haikus with 'broken rules'. I find them fun and exciting, lol.

It's a good thing though, that you're able to pull it off without messing it up. (:

And, I noticed the time. (: I used to keep the time on my poetry. But I started writing one after another, and I was so afraid my inspiration would go that I didn't write the time. And, I gave up after that. Lol. :/

I think we are all afriad of the unknown, but ur right man, we should not fear it Right on.

I like Haiku, I think some people are fooled by its seemingly simplistic style, it's not always easy to fill those 3 lines and have meaning, I think you did a really nice job here. An enjoyable piece.

I think that this one was better than you other as it lead to more open thoughts for the reader to understand. xxx alex xxx

This was a wonderful haiku. There was much beauty in so few words. 5/5

marcella