This all of us probably know. but still, you worded it really well Gem! :) I liked it =)

Marjan x

Gem
You always do so great with your poetry forms. I have learned so much from you.
Great job!
Take Care
Love Cindy

Great write, in few words you have packed lot of beauty.

Take care
chavii.

I like the style of this poem, The word choice, Everything was done great.
Take care <3

Wow..I love all the nature poems and haikus are the best about it
And you really managed to do it in just 3 lines
The wording was so smooth about poem and describes alot

Keep writing Gem,
And take care
Laura

I normally don't like haikus, but this one said a lot for such few words. You did a great job, Gem!
Charisma*

Gem,
This was a wonderful Haiku. It is very well worded and inspirational as well. Great job.
Kay

This is awesome...beautiful and elegantly written, and filled with so much depth and meaning, I found this to be very profound.

Greatly written, it is simple but very powerful. You created excellent atmosphere with just a few words. Word unknown is good for this piece, anyway great job!

This was an interesting piece..I`ve always loved Haikus and I did indeed love this, it really struck a cord with me. The only thing I could think of that could be changed is the section where you have placed the poem..I think it fits more into inspirational. Anyways,

5.5
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This was a wonderful haiku. There was much beauty in so few words. 5/5

marcella

I think that this one was better than you other as it lead to more open thoughts for the reader to understand. xxx alex xxx

I like Haiku, I think some people are fooled by its seemingly simplistic style, it's not always easy to fill those 3 lines and have meaning, I think you did a really nice job here. An enjoyable piece.

I think we are all afriad of the unknown, but ur right man, we should not fear it Right on.

Once again, not relaxing or joyful. Refreshing, but not so much with hope, rather faith.

This haiku I notice isn't traditional. It doesn't really go along with nature, rather human nature - fear. And, you have a long run on sentence rather than 2 parts to it. I read an article once about traditional haikus and 'breaking rules'. And, ever since I've enjoyed reading haikus with 'broken rules'. I find them fun and exciting, lol.

It's a good thing though, that you're able to pull it off without messing it up. (:

And, I noticed the time. (: I used to keep the time on my poetry. But I started writing one after another, and I was so afraid my inspiration would go that I didn't write the time. And, I gave up after that. Lol. :/