by shadowcat Sep 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I lay alone hidden in pitiful shadows, |
Like it :) |
Nicely penned, i like the fact how short but powerful it is 5/5 |
by Adelle
A well written poem I feel it could have been longer but except for this it was good and flowed well. |
Wow short but sweet you got lonliness description right 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |