Great poem
you did a great job
must have taken some work to get it to work out
with the restrictions this poem has
well good job
it was wonderful

Keenan

Bryan
Excellent job on this Villanelle . LOve the imagery.Yet another one I need to try my hand at.
~CLAP~CLAP~
Take Care Cindy

Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Sad and touching, but beautifully written. Well done with this form. Its one I haven't tried as of yet. The rhyme and flow was excellent and the imagery, perfect.

This piece was quite the sad one Bryan but none the less an enjoyable read. I loved the title, Maroon 5 really good choice. The emotion you portrayed was deep which is what I love about you poetry, you always put meaning within each word. Well done deserves a 5/5. ~Mel