When You'r Gone...

by Nonna   Sep 3, 2007


When you're gone..

skies are too dark,no stars shine
you're gone but she's not fine
breaking her heart she never did divine

she spend her nights alone waiting for you
in spite of all the pain you put her through
she still believe that it's all true

she used to be strong but now she can't help but cry
she used to be alright since you said goodbye
i can see her falling from the inside she bit by bit die

tears made canals on her cheek
she is not the same now,she's so weak
her life without you seemed bleak

everything she's doing now is fake
with every passing day she slowly break
loving you was her huge mistake

the smile she once had turned into frown
she can't believe she was just a stage and you turn it down
i can see her dying,she's breaking down

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    I rated this 4/5. except for some grammar mistakes,you did a really good job i think. it was kinda off flow because of the three line rhyming thing but i really enjoyed readng it :]