Wow, greatly written, with totally stunning and vivid imagery. Whole piece is breathtaking, and the metaphors that you used are very unique and creative.
Idea for the poem is powerful, and you expressed emotions through it excellently.
My favorite stanza is:

-And while I crawl across the black
bathing in broken glass,
I shared with sincerity.
Here we shared a bed of ash,
shattered sheets of Love's trash,
our grief in the golden fields of sexual parody.-
^ Truly mind-blowing stanza.
Keep writing, you are very talented!
5/5 from me

"Yet you tasted what it was like to die,
and felt broken hearts fall down your spine,
so I hung frances of joy and sorrow out to dry,
and painted their decaying cheeks with impure wine."

That stanza made me think a bit.
This poem was actually rather good.
I half expected it to be bad.
Either way, you did an amazing job.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5