Looks like u finally woke up and wanted better. what finally made u wake up?

Excellent poem. If this is true than I'm very happy and proud of you.
I love inspirational poems and this was one of the best. It's something a lot of people can relate to but have a hard time doing so the inspiration in this poem was very much needed.
I'm adding this poem to my favourites..and also you ^_^.

Take Care! 5/5

-Shannon <3

I loved it. it is good when you realise that if your are wasting time in your life that it can be changed, although it may hurt, in your heart you know it is for the better. nicely penned.

I love how i can realate to this. i love the chioce in words. good job!!5/5

This was very beautifully written...i enjoy your writting alot...keep it up! talk to you later.