I really liked this one.

It was full of heartfelt emotion's, and really touched my heart.
The flow was good, and but the concept amazing.

'We had it all
A great relationship and a kid on the way
You turn all that down for drugs
Killing my child our child'

^For this I think it would flow better, if you change it too this...

[We had it all
A great relationship and a kid on the way
You turn all that down for drugs
Killing our child]

or put a pause in there.

Still a good peice. 4/5

Elaine.