by MakeBelieveLove Sep 4, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The guilt sinks in |
by Fsams
The rhymes are good and I like it :) The way you have strung the words is great. Loved the flow and the content |
by Crystal Gaze
This was, penned better, than the last. Your flow has improved- the rymthes don't seem forced. |
by aDORKable x3
It wasn't a bad poem at all. I enjoyed it. For some reason, the seven sins appeal to me. lol |
by pixie
This was good |
I really don't think it needs anything, a piece of poetry is great if the author likes it...It had a good meaning behind it and it was a really enjoyable read. I haven't read a poem quite like this one..Well like the story behind it..It was really good.. |