I like it!

I really don't think it needs anything, a piece of poetry is great if the author likes it...It had a good meaning behind it and it was a really enjoyable read. I haven't read a poem quite like this one..Well like the story behind it..It was really good..

5/5

This was good
i love it!

It wasn't a bad poem at all. I enjoyed it. For some reason, the seven sins appeal to me. lol

Turned into a beautiful suicide
^^favorite line

It has irony because suicide has anything but beauty.
Another good job.
4.5
Ciao~

This was, penned better, than the last. Your flow has improved- the rymthes don't seem forced.
This I enjoyed, it was short, sweet and too the point.

Well done,
Elaine.

The rhymes are good and I like it :) The way you have strung the words is great. Loved the flow and the content